03-14-2013, 06:14 PM
Heya again :) I dig the idea.
In terms of crit how about using an almost black vignetted BG instead and have the light source be the paint instead of external so she would be underlit with all sorts of awesome colours? I really like the idea of her hair not just being coloured, but maybe morphing into paint and oozing down her and dripping onto the puddle?
In terms of the text, I think it would benefit from some grammar checking and an external eye on it. I have script edited for published stuff before and I can see that some of it needs a bit of work. As your compositions include text, you should be just as thorough with the wordsmithing as the art. Maybe get someone to proofread it and offer suggestions?
Hope that helps
In terms of crit how about using an almost black vignetted BG instead and have the light source be the paint instead of external so she would be underlit with all sorts of awesome colours? I really like the idea of her hair not just being coloured, but maybe morphing into paint and oozing down her and dripping onto the puddle?
In terms of the text, I think it would benefit from some grammar checking and an external eye on it. I have script edited for published stuff before and I can see that some of it needs a bit of work. As your compositions include text, you should be just as thorough with the wordsmithing as the art. Maybe get someone to proofread it and offer suggestions?
Hope that helps