03-15-2013, 06:22 PM
Hey man nice work. she looks hawt :) be proud mate !
Things i noticed are,
the shading on her bow looks round in some places and blocky in others, overall the read on the volume is compromised. also the bandages could be drawn to reflect volume of the bow better.
compare with the bandages you did on her left leg, you got those down to good effect :)
her back foot could be defined a little better, tip of the shoe should be in view.
Because the shading of her right kneeguard is in higher contrast compared to her left one, its coming more forward in the image plane. I could be mistakened but the left leg is in front of the right yes?
the necklace looks like its floating so a little 10% multiply under it will help it sit on her chest better.
Hope it helps :)
Keep posting!
Things i noticed are,
the shading on her bow looks round in some places and blocky in others, overall the read on the volume is compromised. also the bandages could be drawn to reflect volume of the bow better.
compare with the bandages you did on her left leg, you got those down to good effect :)
her back foot could be defined a little better, tip of the shoe should be in view.
Because the shading of her right kneeguard is in higher contrast compared to her left one, its coming more forward in the image plane. I could be mistakened but the left leg is in front of the right yes?
the necklace looks like its floating so a little 10% multiply under it will help it sit on her chest better.
Hope it helps :)
Keep posting!