False God
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I love the concept and the storytelling, but I'm really not convinced by the perspective of the columns and of the border of tiles. The columns don't look like they are perpendicular to the dais the goddess is on and the difference between the bottom and the top might be too sharp. I suggest you use sketch up or another 3d software to make sure. Be careful of the 3d software's camera settings, you don't want a fisheye or something. Some of your fabric highlights also appear washed out to me. I would think her outfit would have glorious saturated colors but the pattern pales in the light and some parts are too desaturated vs the dark parts.

I also think her eyes should cause rim lights on the hand and mask for a more dramatic effect.

Good luck, you are very close!

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False God - by dwilliams - 03-21-2013, 11:41 AM
RE: False God - by ChantalFournier - 03-21-2013, 09:18 PM
RE: False God - by dwilliams - 03-22-2013, 12:05 AM
RE: False God - by ChantalFournier - 03-22-2013, 12:37 AM
RE: False God - by dwilliams - 03-22-2013, 12:51 AM
RE: False God - by ChantalFournier - 03-22-2013, 02:16 AM
RE: False God - by dwilliams - 03-25-2013, 05:01 AM
RE: False God - by Jaik - 03-25-2013, 11:46 AM

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