03-22-2013, 05:57 PM
the legibility has improved a lot! But I guess I would darken it even more, go nearly black so she looks like she's sitting in this oppressive pit. I did a really quick paintover, just using the burn tool and neglecting the text so you get a sense of what I'm talking about. You could go even darker, I guess. See for yourself if you like it or not =)