03-26-2013, 06:13 AM
The two characters should be a little more unified. They seem to be lit by two different light sources for starters. The placement feels strange as well. You might want the bee boy to overlap the stump monster.
The mountains in the background are lacking atmosphere. Just remember it's hazy on bottom and crisp on top. Think of them as a shape first and a form 2nd. The warp isn't working either. Even if you are stylizing it. You should only use warped perspective when you truly have a grasp of two, three and four point perspective.
The mountains in the background are lacking atmosphere. Just remember it's hazy on bottom and crisp on top. Think of them as a shape first and a form 2nd. The warp isn't working either. Even if you are stylizing it. You should only use warped perspective when you truly have a grasp of two, three and four point perspective.