03-28-2013, 03:19 AM
Thanks, Myriam! I like how this feels more oppressive, but I'm a little sad that the green color is mostly lost. Maybe I'll run both versions by my creative writing group and see what they think!
"Paint" - This is how I feel a lot of days!
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"Paint" - This is how I feel a lot of days! - by Camilleon - 03-13-2013, 03:45 PM
RE: "Paint" - This is how I feel a lot of days! - by Myriam - 03-13-2013, 09:29 PM
RE: "Paint" - This is how I feel a lot of days! - by JabyReART - 03-13-2013, 09:46 PM
RE: "Paint" - This is how I feel a lot of days! - by Amit Dutta - 03-14-2013, 06:14 PM
RE: "Paint" - This is how I feel a lot of days! - by Camilleon - 03-22-2013, 03:31 AM
RE: "Paint" - This is how I feel a lot of days! - by Myriam - 03-22-2013, 05:57 PM
RE: "Paint" - This is how I feel a lot of days! - by Camilleon - 03-28-2013, 03:19 AM
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