04-02-2013, 08:38 PM
(04-02-2013, 07:29 PM)monkeybread Wrote: Well I've been in an art slump for the last two days, so no progress on mine and probably won't get these finished to deadline (will still continue on for a hopeful folio piece regardless). So I thought I would help others out with some crit. If anyone wants crit on their stuff just PM me or add me on Skype (monkeybread) and I'd be happy to give you my opinions :)
@SimonPalmer. Great progress! I know this is kinda late in the game, but I'd say you need to bring in more hyena design elements into the human form. Right now from her earings which are the most visible, I'd almost say she was going to transform into a boar or an elephant (great idea with the tusk earings though!) It's probably late in the game, but yeah, maybe changing those earrings to hyena jaw bones and some hyena relateds tatoos or something?
I agree! I love your design and illustrations of the two, but with her wearing feathers and those earings she's not really hyena-like. I would change the feathers to hyena fur if it's not too late =/ anyway: great stuff! =)