04-03-2013, 06:47 AM
I had time to do some crits :D
rbeek awesome job :) I like this one a lot. I'm not sure what to crit really other then maybe mess around with some of the colors and lighting maybe? I feel like having both pieces use the same exact color and lighting seems a little bland. And you could really use stronger lighting or more saturated colors in the beast mode image to show how much stronger it is. Just a suggestion though :)
Royugang God damn man I love yours. Such a fantastic job with the colors. So I wanted to mention this though, for the beast mode image the comp seems a little strange to me just because my eyes at the moment go to the chest. If you could dim that down a bit and really enhance and push the contrast between the dark of the face of the creature and the light shining behind the eclipse I think the focus could go more to the face. Also, I don't know if you did this purposely but the hand nearest to the eclipse is making a huge tangent with it and kinda looks as if the beast is holding the eclipse in its hand. But again, love it so far can't wait to see it finished :)
croker Those comp sketches look awesome ;)
andrecastalo Nice studies, I'm glad someone is doing a dinosaur of some sort. I can't really supply any crits till I see more work on it so good luck :)
Warburton I really like your piece so far :) I feel like the character is a little cut and paste, maybe try taking some of that teal lighting in the back and having it light the back of the beast a bit more.
EduardoGaray Nice job on making the character unique. I'm looking forward to seeing the beast form. As for crits, maybe try enhancing the blue on the guy a bit more, have it contrast with the background more.
Danar Nice work so far :)
So I think I'm pretty much done unless anyone has any crits? I'd seriously love some I'm really at a loss on what else to do :p
rbeek awesome job :) I like this one a lot. I'm not sure what to crit really other then maybe mess around with some of the colors and lighting maybe? I feel like having both pieces use the same exact color and lighting seems a little bland. And you could really use stronger lighting or more saturated colors in the beast mode image to show how much stronger it is. Just a suggestion though :)
Royugang God damn man I love yours. Such a fantastic job with the colors. So I wanted to mention this though, for the beast mode image the comp seems a little strange to me just because my eyes at the moment go to the chest. If you could dim that down a bit and really enhance and push the contrast between the dark of the face of the creature and the light shining behind the eclipse I think the focus could go more to the face. Also, I don't know if you did this purposely but the hand nearest to the eclipse is making a huge tangent with it and kinda looks as if the beast is holding the eclipse in its hand. But again, love it so far can't wait to see it finished :)
croker Those comp sketches look awesome ;)
andrecastalo Nice studies, I'm glad someone is doing a dinosaur of some sort. I can't really supply any crits till I see more work on it so good luck :)
Warburton I really like your piece so far :) I feel like the character is a little cut and paste, maybe try taking some of that teal lighting in the back and having it light the back of the beast a bit more.
EduardoGaray Nice job on making the character unique. I'm looking forward to seeing the beast form. As for crits, maybe try enhancing the blue on the guy a bit more, have it contrast with the background more.
Danar Nice work so far :)
So I think I'm pretty much done unless anyone has any crits? I'd seriously love some I'm really at a loss on what else to do :p