04-12-2013, 11:18 AM
It's official you are bad ass. That is a great idea you got there. Exploration is the perfect theme for an experimental comic. If you have any story beats written down I'd love to read it.
I only have two critiques. One is I'm not sure how the plot is going to gratify the reader. Is there any sort of antagonist? Stories without one are a bit of a hard sell.
The second is notans are great for composition for wide angle shots, but how do you plan on handling close ups? I'm sure you can, but it could be tricky.
That resource is pretty impressive too. It's the kind of thing I've been looking for.
PS I'm only doing the assignment thing, so there can be a little order. It's sort of a shame when somebody invests hundreds of hours into a project to find a problem in the very foundation. Plus I've wasted time with writers that couldn't explain what their comic was about properly.
I only have two critiques. One is I'm not sure how the plot is going to gratify the reader. Is there any sort of antagonist? Stories without one are a bit of a hard sell.
The second is notans are great for composition for wide angle shots, but how do you plan on handling close ups? I'm sure you can, but it could be tricky.
That resource is pretty impressive too. It's the kind of thing I've been looking for.
PS I'm only doing the assignment thing, so there can be a little order. It's sort of a shame when somebody invests hundreds of hours into a project to find a problem in the very foundation. Plus I've wasted time with writers that couldn't explain what their comic was about properly.