05-12-2013, 12:30 PM
The thing is, right now, your areas of highest contrast are the diagonal rock on the right and the cloud next to the female statue. These things are not the centre of interest so it's a bit confusing. And the 3 big jagged dark things at the bottom of the image are probably rocks or something, but they look more like places where you stopped rendering. I think you need to remove these and redesign them, to look like actual rocks or ground.
Your whole image looks like you didn't stop and make thumbnails and plan. It looks like you started doodling and never stopped and rendering and coloured and now you have all kinds of cool parts, but no coherent composition.
Your whole image looks like you didn't stop and make thumbnails and plan. It looks like you started doodling and never stopped and rendering and coloured and now you have all kinds of cool parts, but no coherent composition.
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