06-08-2013, 09:12 PM
I donno, composition is pretty stiff. Interesting things are only in one corner. City in background looks like totally unimportant. I don't feel any emotions looking on them. City burns in background but girl is like "meh, I'm bored". There's no tragedy it's like nice picture of sunset.
Burning city isn't something you see everyday, she should be showing some kind of extreme emotions. She hated city and she's who destroy it. Or she's in shock watching how her family and friends are just dying. If she don't care at all she could be turned in same direction as golem and have same straight face.
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You need to work on perspective a little. I'm guessing the Golem is huge because there's human on his arm and you can easy compare their sizes. But horizon line isn't quite where it should be. If you want city in background you should go for bird's eye view. If you want to have golem with frontal camera horizon line should be lower. Hope it sounds logical :)
![[Image: 2ziszh3.png]](http://i43.tinypic.com/2ziszh3.png)
Burning city isn't something you see everyday, she should be showing some kind of extreme emotions. She hated city and she's who destroy it. Or she's in shock watching how her family and friends are just dying. If she don't care at all she could be turned in same direction as golem and have same straight face.
You need to work on perspective a little. I'm guessing the Golem is huge because there's human on his arm and you can easy compare their sizes. But horizon line isn't quite where it should be. If you want city in background you should go for bird's eye view. If you want to have golem with frontal camera horizon line should be lower. Hope it sounds logical :)