06-19-2013, 06:50 AM
The sci fictions is not my domain but I think you did amazing job with this pic! Overall it's great I will only write some of my ideas and thinking processes maybe you will find them helpful.
I numbered the flow how I see the picture. First thing is the holograph on right. It have hi contrast, lot of details and it's extremely sharp so it attract my attention. Also it's in power point (intersections of rule of thirds). Later I see the robot hand because it have lot of details and color contrast as well. The head is last catching thing and my eyes just goes out of the image on this point. Also at the second attempt I noticed green color lights as some distraction. Everything is so blue and orange and suddenly green with no reason. I tried different composition, moved it head a little closer to power point and blur holograph to be less important than robot, especially cuz guy who stand in front of it is not detailed at all and it was creating this detail contrast here. Just my thoughts :)
I numbered the flow how I see the picture. First thing is the holograph on right. It have hi contrast, lot of details and it's extremely sharp so it attract my attention. Also it's in power point (intersections of rule of thirds). Later I see the robot hand because it have lot of details and color contrast as well. The head is last catching thing and my eyes just goes out of the image on this point. Also at the second attempt I noticed green color lights as some distraction. Everything is so blue and orange and suddenly green with no reason. I tried different composition, moved it head a little closer to power point and blur holograph to be less important than robot, especially cuz guy who stand in front of it is not detailed at all and it was creating this detail contrast here. Just my thoughts :)