06-27-2013, 09:43 PM
Hi Rios! As a first approach to drawing humans it's going pretty well. This picture have some problems mostly because you picked camera from above her head but parts of her face are drawn from front. Take a mirror and observe your own face what's happening in look from above. Tip of nose cover nostrils, you see less of upper lip, eyebrows are closer to eyes and so on. Her ear is really unnatural, study some reference photo. I don't think she looks to dark it's actually the other way around her face isn't shaded enough. Pick a light source, is it diffused light or direct light and stick to it :)
