07-08-2013, 11:22 AM
OOOOOH, i didn't realize that they were giant mechs. I think it's because you used scaled up shape language. A lot of forms on them look human sized, and the water is lacking the tiny details to make that look small as well.
You should break up the forms into smaller panels, make the hand hold rungs actually the right size for the characters, make the antennae arrays tiny ect. Also i'd recommend breaking up the panels a lot more.
Pretty sure you know ukitakumuki from the shape language you use. But have a look at the scales on his shape language for his giant mechs.
I tried to do a paintover. Main thing i did was scale down the heads, and try and make the shape language smaller on a bunch of the mechs.
http://snag.gy/IsqdN.jpg
You should break up the forms into smaller panels, make the hand hold rungs actually the right size for the characters, make the antennae arrays tiny ect. Also i'd recommend breaking up the panels a lot more.
Pretty sure you know ukitakumuki from the shape language you use. But have a look at the scales on his shape language for his giant mechs.
I tried to do a paintover. Main thing i did was scale down the heads, and try and make the shape language smaller on a bunch of the mechs.
http://snag.gy/IsqdN.jpg
Drawing out of perspective is like singing out of tune. I'll throw a shoe at you if you do it.
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