07-16-2013, 03:22 AM
Hey man more good work.
I think with your speed paints something that might help is try and vary the size of your details, as it feels really consistent throughout it all. Your values and colours on that last piece rock, but it still feels kinda boring because of it.
Hmm, heres a paintover trying to address this. While doing it i think i also noticed that your are using a lot of primitive flat shapes, try and break them up more, like all the foliage on the trees are essentially ovals. Break it up, be more bold with your shapes!
http://imgur.com/YDyMuvC
I think with your speed paints something that might help is try and vary the size of your details, as it feels really consistent throughout it all. Your values and colours on that last piece rock, but it still feels kinda boring because of it.
Hmm, heres a paintover trying to address this. While doing it i think i also noticed that your are using a lot of primitive flat shapes, try and break them up more, like all the foliage on the trees are essentially ovals. Break it up, be more bold with your shapes!
http://imgur.com/YDyMuvC
Drawing out of perspective is like singing out of tune. I'll throw a shoe at you if you do it.
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