07-17-2013, 09:19 AM
I think you could toss in a 3rd, darker value for the smile lines.
Right now theres only two, which makes it read as a mild plane change.
Tossing in a slightly darker value will make the plane change slightly more dramatic, and will accentuate the rest of the smile. Just don't make it too much of a leap. Maybe only by a level of value or so
Hope that helps. The rest of the image looks great by the way. I would lean towards to the one with the darker background but thats just my preference.
Right now theres only two, which makes it read as a mild plane change.
Tossing in a slightly darker value will make the plane change slightly more dramatic, and will accentuate the rest of the smile. Just don't make it too much of a leap. Maybe only by a level of value or so
Hope that helps. The rest of the image looks great by the way. I would lean towards to the one with the darker background but thats just my preference.