08-15-2013, 08:37 AM
It looks like you might have started in on the rendering a little early. Try making a new layer on top of what you've got, and use that as a planning layer. Sketch in the basic skeleton, mark what direction you want the light to be coming from, maybe even put in arrows you want the composition to flow in if that's giving you any trouble. Use that layer as notes to help keep you on track.
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