Yoko Littner
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Her right leg (her right) looks broken because it doesn't seem to match up with the direction of her pelvis. And I agree with Ward about (her right leg, at least) looking swollen.

The first issue can be fixed just by moving the knee to face the viewer more, not too much would have to be redrawn.

The second just comes from redoing the way her legging looks on her right leg, I think. It looks a little too tight on that leg.

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Yoko Littner - by Samszym - 08-16-2013, 06:51 AM
RE: Yoko Littner - by Wardy - 08-16-2013, 07:27 AM
RE: Yoko Littner - by Samszym - 08-16-2013, 07:35 AM
RE: Yoko Littner - by Psychotime - 08-16-2013, 07:36 AM
RE: Yoko Littner - by Samszym - 08-16-2013, 09:14 AM
RE: Yoko Littner - by darktiste - 08-16-2013, 11:24 AM
RE: Yoko Littner - by DoubleThink - 08-20-2013, 06:14 AM

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