Suggestions/critiques welcome!
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Hi!

I'd like to know what you guys think of this piece, in which I've been working at for several days now. I am kinda partial about it myself: it's basically what I first envisioned, but as of now, it seems to me that it is lacking something. The story is this: a princess girl is looking out from her beach castle/fortress, longing for something, perhaps going on adventures, or waiting for an answer. I tried to reinforce the latter idea by placing an empty bird cage by her. All that is already conveyed, I think.. and yet.. the image seems a bit boring to me. :/

It could also be that I've grown too used of seeing it; I just don't know. That's why I'd be very thankful if someone could tell me what they think about it.

Having a fresh look at your work is immensely helpful, I believe. Thanks in advance!



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Suggestions/critiques welcome! - by JBZ - 08-23-2013, 03:59 AM
RE: Suggestions/critiques welcome! - by JBZ - 08-23-2013, 07:42 PM
RE: Suggestions/critiques welcome! - by Kaffer - 08-24-2013, 01:33 AM
RE: Suggestions/critiques welcome! - by JBZ - 08-24-2013, 06:51 AM

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