08-25-2013, 11:35 AM
Love those helmet designs!
The one with the quote is super cool, maybe rearrange the composition so that the text is in the flat dark area of body instead of cramped between his head and the frame all the way up there at the top. Try and keep your values a bit closer together too, it's hard to tell what material the helmet is. It looks fairly matte all around but then jumps up to some speculars that look out of place based on the lighting, especially the one on the left in the shadow side of the face.
The one with the quote is super cool, maybe rearrange the composition so that the text is in the flat dark area of body instead of cramped between his head and the frame all the way up there at the top. Try and keep your values a bit closer together too, it's hard to tell what material the helmet is. It looks fairly matte all around but then jumps up to some speculars that look out of place based on the lighting, especially the one on the left in the shadow side of the face.