08-27-2013, 02:38 AM
Main objective:One character that catch the eye(Pose and facial expression and where the eye of the character is looking at )
Secondary objective:add something to add personality and originality to the character(object,light source,familliar,aura,)
Third objective:background enchancing the character
so for me the problem is that you focus to much on the storytelling part but that only a opinion
you should focus more on the charism of the character face expression and pose and composition
DON'T FORGET EACH CARD REPRESENT A ELEMENT OF THE GAME CREATURE,OBJECT,EFFECT,OBJECTIVE,TERRAIN SO YOU NEED TO BE CLEAR ON THAT PRESENTATION
Here some example of magic the gathering look at how simple they are.
Secondary objective:add something to add personality and originality to the character(object,light source,familliar,aura,)
Third objective:background enchancing the character
so for me the problem is that you focus to much on the storytelling part but that only a opinion
you should focus more on the charism of the character face expression and pose and composition
DON'T FORGET EACH CARD REPRESENT A ELEMENT OF THE GAME CREATURE,OBJECT,EFFECT,OBJECTIVE,TERRAIN SO YOU NEED TO BE CLEAR ON THAT PRESENTATION
Here some example of magic the gathering look at how simple they are.