08-31-2013, 07:06 AM
Hey Jake. I like that last wip. My only crits are the anatomy of the hand on the left looks a little off. The lengths of the first joints look too long or maybe the knuckles aren't high enough. My second crit is that I think you could add some variety to the cliff skyline. I know they're a compositional tool, directing the eye, but I think they'd be more interesting if they were jagged or tree lined maybe. Right now they look a little too square. Also, maybe add a tiny bit more atmospheric perspective to them so the character really pops.