Felidarc's Sketchbook

[Budgie]

Mmm, I'm digging the hair and colors on the mermaid girl, but something feels flat on het torso. I like the photo study of a face in your first post, because it feels kinda sculpty. But, I miss this on the upper torso of the mermaid. The colors feel right, but there's an error in the form. Her rib cage on the right should be sticking out more, and het hip on the right side can be a bit rounder. Perhaps you could also clean up some rendering a bit, that would make it extra awesome (; take a larger brush and just, how to explain is, less dotty? I'm missing some sharp edges, especially on the hands. Also, the dark area underneath looks very very dark and kinda empty, you probably just did not do that part yet, but you could take a look at that. Oh, almost forgot, het torso seems very long. Like, where that golden ring is, that's probably where her crotch should be. But, it's a mermaid, you could have wanted it like that.

Great practise, love your color usage, and keep arting :D

Cheers!