03-12-2012, 06:33 PM
The easiest improvement to make in terms of composition is to watch your rule of thirds. just slap your focal point over one of the crosses, and that will help a lot:
Also watch out for tangents. [link]
I see some touching edges along the shield (horizon and spear), the sword hilt, the loin cloth.
Also add a reason for dynamism. making something dynamic is a very difficult thing to do in terms of abstract concept. adding an actual 'reason' or 'goal' for an action will create more tension. for example: "two guys are running flat out, seemingly racing each other." cool. But then if you add "... and they're like 5 feet from the finish line." it makes it more exciting. please take this advice with a grain of salt though, I only learned all this stuff like a month ago :blush:
Also watch out for tangents. [link]
I see some touching edges along the shield (horizon and spear), the sword hilt, the loin cloth.
Also add a reason for dynamism. making something dynamic is a very difficult thing to do in terms of abstract concept. adding an actual 'reason' or 'goal' for an action will create more tension. for example: "two guys are running flat out, seemingly racing each other." cool. But then if you add "... and they're like 5 feet from the finish line." it makes it more exciting. please take this advice with a grain of salt though, I only learned all this stuff like a month ago :blush: