10-04-2013, 10:24 PM
Well that depends on what is the purpose of this drawing? Cuz for me looks like a cartoon background in meaning it have lot of empty space for characters to be added later. It's nice picture, I would maybe think about stronger bluish air perspective... but composition have nothing what would interest you, no story, nothing to direct your eyes. Missing the something or someone who would grab your attention and awake any emotions in viewer. It's just forest in snow nothing more but maybe it suppose to be like that...