Jaik's Sketches & Thoughts

[Lyraina]

Very nice environment again, not much to critique! Only the violoet leaves are standing out a bit from the rest because of their unique color, maybe you could mix in a bit of it in other places, so that it fits in with the rest better.

Concerning the b/w figure, I think you just placed her eyes a bit too high in her face (meaning the nose is too long). This makes the head look like you're missing a bit of the top of the head, despite the measurements being technically correct. Justr try placing them a bit lower and see if you like it better... Next thing that irritates me is the strand of her hair - unless she used a whole can of hair spray, I don't think it would just stay behind her shoulder like that. If you want to keep it that way to preserve the asymmetry, at least let the strand fall down a bit besides her face, and then put it over her shoulder. (Gravity!) Now if this changes her somewhat stern look too much for your liking, you could always make her features more edged, or transform her face to be a bit longer or slimmer (because it does get shorter with shortening the nose of course).
Also, be careful not to place the breats too high :)