11-11-2013, 02:55 PM
Hey there!
this is the first time I try any kind of crit so I hope this makes any sense!
composition : try to place points of interest using the rule of thirds, here for instance I placed the orb thing on top of the tower in the distance on one and the rhino guy's eye on another. You could also use that little "hologram".
I think it also helps to center him a bit because he was very friendly with that edge of the screen :)
![[Image: rhino_zps087beaa6.jpg~original]](http://i746.photobucket.com/albums/xx103/yannflam/critique%20material/rhino_zps087beaa6.jpg~original)
As far as ref goes, you'r not always going to find the perfect shot, so I'd suggest using a muscular human for the shapes and then looking at Rhino head and skin and trying to make the connections.
If needed you could also look at Rhino from spider man, I know there are very realistic renderings of him out there. Besides him there are the Judoon race in Doctor Who, there is Rocksteady from TMNT, again you will not find exactly what you're looking for but it could help :)
![[Image: Untitled-4_zps390140c6.jpg~original]](http://i746.photobucket.com/albums/xx103/yannflam/critique%20material/Untitled-4_zps390140c6.jpg~original)
![[Image: 6780298104_12428e96c1_zpsd0f02d9e.jpg~original]](http://i746.photobucket.com/albums/xx103/yannflam/critique%20material/6780298104_12428e96c1_zpsd0f02d9e.jpg~original)
Hope that helps a bit!
this is the first time I try any kind of crit so I hope this makes any sense!
composition : try to place points of interest using the rule of thirds, here for instance I placed the orb thing on top of the tower in the distance on one and the rhino guy's eye on another. You could also use that little "hologram".
I think it also helps to center him a bit because he was very friendly with that edge of the screen :)
![[Image: rhino_zps087beaa6.jpg~original]](http://s746.photobucket.com/user/yannflam/media/critique%20material/rhino_zps087beaa6.jpg.html)
As far as ref goes, you'r not always going to find the perfect shot, so I'd suggest using a muscular human for the shapes and then looking at Rhino head and skin and trying to make the connections.
If needed you could also look at Rhino from spider man, I know there are very realistic renderings of him out there. Besides him there are the Judoon race in Doctor Who, there is Rocksteady from TMNT, again you will not find exactly what you're looking for but it could help :)
![[Image: Untitled-4_zps390140c6.jpg~original]](http://s746.photobucket.com/user/yannflam/media/critique%20material/Untitled-4_zps390140c6.jpg.html)
![[Image: 6780298104_12428e96c1_zpsd0f02d9e.jpg~original]](http://s746.photobucket.com/user/yannflam/media/critique%20material/6780298104_12428e96c1_zpsd0f02d9e.jpg.html)
Hope that helps a bit!