Mannequin's sketchbook,

[Adam Lina]

Awesome sketch book! Yea I agree with the above posts about the magic girl. I think you need to zazz it up a bit. Just throw in some more zazz, ya know what I mean? Put it on the zazz train to zazzville. But to be more specific it looks like shes walking away from a lighter area and into a dark area. So maybe make the front side of her in shadow with the yellowish glow as a main light source? It might make for a more dramatic effect.