Egbu draws stuff!

[Yann.F]

Hi Egbu!

Impressive amount of work and will to progress you have in here!

I see you've applied the previous crits you got about changing tones depending on distance,
irregular shapes, overlapping, and that's great!

Now since you asked for crits:

If you're in an extreme setting like this, that should be reflected in your painting : don't be afraid to go extreme with values, pump up the saturation, and don't forget to treat your lava as a light-source that's gonna affect the surrounding environment, especially where the rocks go into the lava.

here's a thumbnail paint-over to illustrate what i mean:



Hope that makes sense, keep up the hard work!