03-25-2012, 07:33 PM
@Vertical:
Perspective of the door is not correct. Look at the bottom and the higher parts. Horizon line is too high, You should extend thr frame of the door a little bit to the bottom. Her eyes aren't looking exatly at frogs direction (in the last sketch). Other than that I don't see any fundamental flaws and face expressions in both sketches are very well drawn. keep it up.
Perspective of the door is not correct. Look at the bottom and the higher parts. Horizon line is too high, You should extend thr frame of the door a little bit to the bottom. Her eyes aren't looking exatly at frogs direction (in the last sketch). Other than that I don't see any fundamental flaws and face expressions in both sketches are very well drawn. keep it up.