12-14-2013, 09:12 AM
(12-13-2013, 03:00 PM)Mike086 Wrote: Your anatomy is broken, the head is too small. Your blue sky would affect his clothing, he has a copy and pasted look because of that.
Meat is correct about your outline, it needs one or none, right now it looks unfinished.
Is the big white circle a light source? If so the lighting it not matching it, put an action figure on a table and shine a flashlight towards it and into your eyes, it would cause a heavy shadow and obscure the figure.
Another issue is that you are dipping into your dark values too much. Do a study with a figure and a flashlight.
Hello just want to share my opinion about your comment i think you sound to ''me'' a bit to aggressive like he as no choose but to follow your instruction i would recommend you to say you can instead of do a study because to ''me''it was to imperative .It would sound better in my opinion.Also saying that is anatomy is broken was for ''me'' not acceptable