12-15-2013, 08:31 AM
Main crit is to tell you to slow down. You are pumping out the work and I dont mean to slow down on how much you are working but maybe focus on your strokes a little more, try and get forms (i.e. cheekbones) to read properly. Try and make all of them look like the one of the top left. The gestures are looking good, a lot of motion in them. Pull out a loomis book as well, your placements are pretty accurate and the proportion is too, but you can always learn from the master :D
Keep going, you are going great :D
Keep going, you are going great :D