12-21-2013, 06:39 AM
i really like how your last piece turned man, and Sula paintover looks great, i would really recommend to go in that direction, but i'm saying the obvious again haha.
The only thing i would critique is that there are too many hard edges.
So even if everything is rendered properly, you cant lead the eye of the viewer to the main point because everything is attracting the eye.
You always can try to soften the edges with an airbrush or the smudge tool and see how it looks.
I'm also not really sure about those birds, they are just taking attention and nothing else, if you could place them strategically to lead them to the guy on his knees or the sword that would be really cool!
The only thing i would critique is that there are too many hard edges.
So even if everything is rendered properly, you cant lead the eye of the viewer to the main point because everything is attracting the eye.
You always can try to soften the edges with an airbrush or the smudge tool and see how it looks.
I'm also not really sure about those birds, they are just taking attention and nothing else, if you could place them strategically to lead them to the guy on his knees or the sword that would be really cool!
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