01-16-2014, 07:43 AM
Thanks Nika :)
Hypnagogic_Haze is right about Dany's mouth, I think it is basically the lower lip that is extended a bit too far towards the corners of the mouth. Nice muted palette though.
The armored girl looks cool, I like the gold/red/blue combination. But are you sure that this is where you want your viewer's attention to be - right at her butt? ;) Placing that contrast/light background near her head would pull the focal point a bit more upwards, where also the most interesting design is happening. But this obviously only depends on where you want our attention to go first. :)
Hypnagogic_Haze is right about Dany's mouth, I think it is basically the lower lip that is extended a bit too far towards the corners of the mouth. Nice muted palette though.
The armored girl looks cool, I like the gold/red/blue combination. But are you sure that this is where you want your viewer's attention to be - right at her butt? ;) Placing that contrast/light background near her head would pull the focal point a bit more upwards, where also the most interesting design is happening. But this obviously only depends on where you want our attention to go first. :)