Sandras Sketchbook

[Flo]

hey there,

I really like that Sargent Study, her rosy cheeks came out nicely.

Maybe try to think about the edges a bit more. Where a hard edges, firm edges, soft and lost edges. That helps making a painting look finished.

Also I took the freedom to paint over your girl - warrior.

She stood a bit stooped over, so I pushed her back so her head was above her feet more. Then I tried to define a cohesive light source and added shadows here and there. Also I added some of the before mentioned hard edges and modelled some of the forms out.

I hope it helps.

Cheers,
Flo