02-23-2014, 04:56 AM
Nice work. I like your latest one. There's a lot of improvement with what I think looks like is your biggest issue, really bringing everything together to feel like parts of the same object.
Some of your shadows on this one feel a bit weak and flat. Sure they're on pale skin, but the shadow on her right leg under the skull goes to full black, but the ones inside her elbow, under her left forearm, and under her legs/knees go to this kinda wussy, weak gray. Compared to the really strong, bold shadows elsewhere in the piece, they fall flat.
The face is great though, looks cohesive and has good volume. Maybe soften or feather your hairline though, it looks a little hard and unnatural.
Some of your shadows on this one feel a bit weak and flat. Sure they're on pale skin, but the shadow on her right leg under the skull goes to full black, but the ones inside her elbow, under her left forearm, and under her legs/knees go to this kinda wussy, weak gray. Compared to the really strong, bold shadows elsewhere in the piece, they fall flat.
The face is great though, looks cohesive and has good volume. Maybe soften or feather your hairline though, it looks a little hard and unnatural.