03-14-2014, 08:12 PM
I think it looks great. Really nice job. I guess I understand what psychotime is saying a bit, in terms of texture density of the fire, there probably is some scope to simplify a little in areas if you wanted. I do agree that the fire does need to affect things. You might be ok with subduing the background by leaving as is, but definitely the lower part of her dress should be shifted more towards the warm than it is, and not sure the lighting on it rings true given the environment.
Also not 100% convinced by the perspective of the arches, mostly that right column arch seems a little off somehow. And this is a personal thing, but i don't like uber render everywhere, so it was me I would imply more of the background than detail it. In general though it's a pretty strong piece and a good render job. Well done.
Also not 100% convinced by the perspective of the arches, mostly that right column arch seems a little off somehow. And this is a personal thing, but i don't like uber render everywhere, so it was me I would imply more of the background than detail it. In general though it's a pretty strong piece and a good render job. Well done.