04-16-2012, 10:33 AM
This picture is hurting in many areas. Some of it will be difficult to explain.
The water and fire needs much less detail due to atmospheric distortion. The trail of water leading up to the character needs to get gone.
The sun doesn't wrap around the sky. Why would you do that?
I don't know why his suit is furry, but I'll accept it. I'm going to stretch my imagination and say it's sea lion fur. Find a point of focus and ref wet sea lion fur intensively for that area and obscure the rest. The motion track should not be furry. You'll have to use motion blur on the figure as it goes into the distance.
The pose is a little stiff. You need to put his body and emotion into the action. It might be a little late this time around. Just keep that in mind next time around.
The water and fire needs much less detail due to atmospheric distortion. The trail of water leading up to the character needs to get gone.
The sun doesn't wrap around the sky. Why would you do that?
I don't know why his suit is furry, but I'll accept it. I'm going to stretch my imagination and say it's sea lion fur. Find a point of focus and ref wet sea lion fur intensively for that area and obscure the rest. The motion track should not be furry. You'll have to use motion blur on the figure as it goes into the distance.
The pose is a little stiff. You need to put his body and emotion into the action. It might be a little late this time around. Just keep that in mind next time around.