04-11-2014, 07:42 PM
Hey Jaik, sorry for the late reply
What I meant was more composition-oriented stuff.. somehow I feel the building with the dome is the focal point, and that other building in the corner just diverts our attention. Also some more contrast on the main building might be something to consider, and a little aerial perspective in the background to get rid of "not-called-for" contrast area in the painting..
I took the audacity to do a paint-over, I hope you don't mind, to show what I meant
Also, If you are about to do cityscapes, I think you should try to handle them in groups, not in individual objects.. after all, they have to be a nice painting altogether, not one by one :) Try to experiment with their rythm, shapes and forms, try different lighting situations.. And those are fun as hell too :)
What I meant was more composition-oriented stuff.. somehow I feel the building with the dome is the focal point, and that other building in the corner just diverts our attention. Also some more contrast on the main building might be something to consider, and a little aerial perspective in the background to get rid of "not-called-for" contrast area in the painting..
I took the audacity to do a paint-over, I hope you don't mind, to show what I meant
Also, If you are about to do cityscapes, I think you should try to handle them in groups, not in individual objects.. after all, they have to be a nice painting altogether, not one by one :) Try to experiment with their rythm, shapes and forms, try different lighting situations.. And those are fun as hell too :)