04-18-2014, 05:43 AM
Mmmmhh nice!! I see some good stuff, in all seriousness your work is atractive, I can see you have a feel for what you are going for, that's awesome.
As a crit, do some research on lineweight, scott robertson has this video on it, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x0zl5NnEAyU It'll help your lines to depict form and depth, those noses seem flat, this should help you.
PD: I can see you are already experimenting with lineweight but some guidelines and tips from scott will help you. If you by any chance have the book ''Shadowline'' by Iain Mccaig, he has just a couple of words about it that helped me a lot, you might find it online, or just look at his work, he's really good at it and you'll learn a lot from his drawings if you study them.
As a crit, do some research on lineweight, scott robertson has this video on it, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x0zl5NnEAyU It'll help your lines to depict form and depth, those noses seem flat, this should help you.
PD: I can see you are already experimenting with lineweight but some guidelines and tips from scott will help you. If you by any chance have the book ''Shadowline'' by Iain Mccaig, he has just a couple of words about it that helped me a lot, you might find it online, or just look at his work, he's really good at it and you'll learn a lot from his drawings if you study them.