04-24-2014, 07:08 PM
Jake! Good to see this one being pushed to finish, with all the studies and everything. I've always felt like I learn the most after doing the finished stuff, but I totally know the feeling you describe.
I know it's still in the early stages, but if I could offer a couple crits on that last piece: I think if you moved the dragon's head more to the right so we can see more of it, it would help with the composition; he feels a little hidden behind the knight. Also I think if you made the knight a darker value, it would help him stand out more from the dragon and help the value read. Again, apologies if the crits are a little premature, I know it's still a WIP. Keep pushin it! You're almost at the halfway point woooooooooo
I know it's still in the early stages, but if I could offer a couple crits on that last piece: I think if you moved the dragon's head more to the right so we can see more of it, it would help with the composition; he feels a little hidden behind the knight. Also I think if you made the knight a darker value, it would help him stand out more from the dragon and help the value read. Again, apologies if the crits are a little premature, I know it's still a WIP. Keep pushin it! You're almost at the halfway point woooooooooo
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