05-06-2014, 12:05 AM
Hi Baodo,
I did a quick overpaint of your piece. I tried to highlight a handful of key points that your original image lacked a bit to me :
1- Contrast -> The original file was quite faint, thus hard to read properly
2- Direction -> there is now a cultist/phantom that is moving toward the [old] man. This directs the eye toward the focal point of the piece : the man's fear
3- Color opposition -> it's not quite there yet, but I tried to give the man warm tones (he's alive) and a yellow light source, while the phantom is purple-ish and comes from the darkness
Good luck going forward !
![[Image: fQkIQjm.jpg?1]](http://i.imgur.com/fQkIQjm.jpg?1)
I did a quick overpaint of your piece. I tried to highlight a handful of key points that your original image lacked a bit to me :
1- Contrast -> The original file was quite faint, thus hard to read properly
2- Direction -> there is now a cultist/phantom that is moving toward the [old] man. This directs the eye toward the focal point of the piece : the man's fear
3- Color opposition -> it's not quite there yet, but I tried to give the man warm tones (he's alive) and a yellow light source, while the phantom is purple-ish and comes from the darkness
Good luck going forward !