05-24-2014, 03:47 AM
Hi!
I've been looking at your work wich is very good at my opionion.
Only a few things would help it looking less flat, more alive.
![[Image: 194613doc.jpg]](http://www.zimage.fr/mini/194613doc.jpg)
Zimage
I did this sketch to tell you how I would see it.
- dont align every elements (or if you wanted them to be aligned) it s no good for dynamic.
-shoulders are straight, less movement.
-give cloth more life, the coat could be floating.
-be more precise on the light sources and how your characters receive it.
These are only personnal feels, someone else may have better ideas ;)
I love your monsters !
I've been looking at your work wich is very good at my opionion.
Only a few things would help it looking less flat, more alive.
ZimageI did this sketch to tell you how I would see it.
- dont align every elements (or if you wanted them to be aligned) it s no good for dynamic.
-shoulders are straight, less movement.
-give cloth more life, the coat could be floating.
-be more precise on the light sources and how your characters receive it.
These are only personnal feels, someone else may have better ideas ;)
I love your monsters !