SPIDER/DWARF

[Adam Lina]

I like the narrative element you gave it. Its funny and builds suspense. The big spider is kind of flat looking Id say. Also the hair and textures on its body and legs needs to be defined more. Do some studies of animal fur and/or insects to get a better rendering of the textures. I wouldnt worry much about getting likes on DA. That site is mostly full of softcore porn and shitty fan art.