06-15-2014, 01:08 AM
yeah its a great piece, i see why you'd want to.
all I was going to say is that its hard to see what level the attacker is on, his fist is making a tangent with the main hulk guy's arm, which makes it seem a bit awkward. if i was me, i'd have him top right foreground jumping towards him, to make it a bit more dynamic.
that said, the rendering on this is excellent, and youve made a piece packed with energy so you should feel very happy with it. so final thought- mind tangents and maybe spread the action over more layers- all of it is happening on one plane at the moment.
hope it helps for your next piece, great work.
all I was going to say is that its hard to see what level the attacker is on, his fist is making a tangent with the main hulk guy's arm, which makes it seem a bit awkward. if i was me, i'd have him top right foreground jumping towards him, to make it a bit more dynamic.
that said, the rendering on this is excellent, and youve made a piece packed with energy so you should feel very happy with it. so final thought- mind tangents and maybe spread the action over more layers- all of it is happening on one plane at the moment.
hope it helps for your next piece, great work.