Horse1313 sketchbook

[ZombieChinchilla]

I recommend going back and reexamining the foreshortening on your last piece. I can see where you're going, with having her torso being foreshortened, but it reads as her boobs being on her shoulders. Either that or just move her boobs to much lower on her chest and closer together somewhat.

Either way, check out this video on foreshortening: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eJWLaDSNBAI