vymnis sketchbook

[JyonnyNovice]

Hi Vymnis, I really like your sketchbook, your figure practice pages are really nice! The girl riding the (bomb?) is cool too. The lady with the axe looks great too, just, she looks a little 'flat' to me, what do you think? Like she's a cardboard cutout. It could be how she's standing, since both her feet are in line with each other but her torso is in 3/4 view - or maybe try to play with the values a bit.

Just my observation anyway! Keep up your hard work and great drawing!