08-22-2014, 11:44 AM
Don't loose your sketchbooks! D: Or at least write your name/address/number in it so that someone who finds it can contact you..
I feel like your lifedrawings are getting better. Can't really nail it down but I think it's structure, lines, values... so everything basically that's improving :P
The 3d enviro could use a bit more contrast (levels adjustment) I think... Pushing the shadow areas back a bit (also in level of detail/importance) and bringing out the lit areas. You're getting a lot better at creating interesting moods, but I often feel like you could push it just a tiny bit more. Composition is pretty cool though. Nice light/dark layering and diagonals and stuff :)
I feel like your lifedrawings are getting better. Can't really nail it down but I think it's structure, lines, values... so everything basically that's improving :P
The 3d enviro could use a bit more contrast (levels adjustment) I think... Pushing the shadow areas back a bit (also in level of detail/importance) and bringing out the lit areas. You're getting a lot better at creating interesting moods, but I often feel like you could push it just a tiny bit more. Composition is pretty cool though. Nice light/dark layering and diagonals and stuff :)