09-07-2014, 07:49 AM
Whaaaat's that talk about not knowing color, that spider piece is coming along super nice! I agree with atrenr, some more spiderwebs are a nice way to introduce some more compositional lines and details. Other than that, two minor things that look off to me, although I'm not 100% sure about them: First one is the lower arm of Mrs. Spider, that muscle standing out there looks really too pronounced to me for her slim body. Not sure if it should make her look more arachnid, but it it made me go "huh" when I saw it. Second thing is how her torso connects to the spider-part - her body is not really that twisted, is it? Lowering the left butt cheek slightly or adjusting the rim on her back a bit might already fix this.
Keep it up! Looking really cool :)
Keep it up! Looking really cool :)