09-18-2014, 09:11 PM
You've already had a ton of awesome crits here man and its already looking ten times more awesome so I wont go crazy on my crit here but that back wing looks off to me.
For the longest time I thought it was a tangent cloud. I would maybe consider darkening it slightly and seeing how it looks and also adjust the position of it. Could be wrong here but to me it feels like it should be more behind the rider as apposed to in front of here based on this positioning.
Even way man I wouldn't call this garbage lol, your friends a lucky dude to have this as an original print! All the best mate.
For the longest time I thought it was a tangent cloud. I would maybe consider darkening it slightly and seeing how it looks and also adjust the position of it. Could be wrong here but to me it feels like it should be more behind the rider as apposed to in front of here based on this positioning.
Even way man I wouldn't call this garbage lol, your friends a lucky dude to have this as an original print! All the best mate.